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Deep Blue CSS
Free for everyone to use when adding the required footer.

Again:
That is free for everyone to use.
You don't need to ask for my permission because everyone is allowed to use it.

:pointr: Live journal example
:pointr: User guide
:pointr: More free Journal Skins/CSS's

I appreciate all and any critique on it.

Shell stocks by ~huomennastock, ~chop-stock and ~hatestock

Edit:
:wow: a DD! My second for the dA related gallery!
And I was already proud to be on the 5th most popular.
This tops it off completely, that you very much ^DCZed! :boogie:


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Daily Deviation

Given 2009-07-01

Deep Blue Journal Skin by =Thewinator is everything you need in a CSS - stylish, practical, easy to use and with the perfect amount of gradients. What more could you ask for? (Featured by ^DCZed)

Critiques


:iconginkgografix:
When looking at this there is not much that really needs some critique. I think the journal itself is very well balanced and it's easy to concentrate on the content. With the rather plain structure the focus is definitely on the content and especially when using images you have a nice "frame" to showcase them.
The colors work very well together and create a nice mood when exploring what each deviant has to tell.

On the other hand the simple layout can let it be a bit boring when people are going to write a lot of text. Even more if they maybe will use just one box. But i guess most people are decorating their journals with a lot of images, icons and emotes, so that is really something minor.

So finally there are just two things i would suggest to improve a bit.
The first thing would be the bottom. I love the way you incorporated the shells, but they could be a bit lighter. It looks too similar, too blue, too equal. Maybe work a bit on the contrast, add some highlights and let them shine a bit more to pick up the "light theme" at the top and with the shiny headlines.

Talking of headlines it leads me to my second suggestion. When looking at this preview, they are the boldest part - together with the images.
Opposite to them the journal title and the menu seem to be rather unimportant, but should be a bit more dominant, because the journal title is that what will attract your watchers and random visitors, while the menu should be easily seen as something like that. So maybe a bit more of variety when hovering over those links would be nice or any other highlight that will catch more attention.

Hope it was useful and keep up the good work :thumbsup:

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Comments


:iconramonzuton:
hmm had je deze niet al ns geupload?

nice anyway hoor, daar niet van :P

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:iconkovowolf:
this is epic win :>

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:iconthewinator:
Ja klopt, alleen nu is hij te gebruiken met het nieuwe systeem.
Ik zou normaal gesproken gewoon geupdate hebben maar voor dat systeem moet het als een nieuwe deviation worden gesubmit.

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:iconramonzuton:
ah okay dat heeft dan ook te maken met dat knopje eronder om m direct toe te passen natuurlijk...
niks gezegd dan, lekker je gang blijven gaan, ik houdt mn mond erover :P

komen dr nog n zooi nu zeker :P?

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:iconthewinator:
Waarschijnlijk wel :P
En mss ook nog een nieuwe binnenkort als ik de psd eindelijk eens per mail gestuurd krijg voor het ontwerp D:

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:iconcarrotstalker:
OOoh I really like this one, lovely blue shades :love: Might use it if I ever get that sub :D

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:music: 'Those who are dead are not dead, they're just living in my bread.' :toast:
:iconthewinator:
:boogie:

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:iconramonzuton:
achjah kan je in de tussentijd zelf nog een zooi andere maken he :P

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:iconthewinator:
Jah ik heb er ook nog 5 te resubmittten xD

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:iconramonzuton:
haha succes ermee verder dan, houdt ik je niet langer bezig met deze onzin :P

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